Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2001/01/26
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Matt Kollasch <matthew.kollasch@uni.edu> wrote: > PAW 4 is up at > http://www.uni.edu/kollasch/photo/paw/pages/week-04.htm > with 2 alternates. I like the concept. The eyes on the paper behind the face reflected in the glass is interesting. I'd suggest next time try focusing on the reflection in the glass and see how that makes the image look. As it is, the reflection is just too blurry and distracting. It's hard to tell what it is. I'm not sure that the items on the left side add anything to the image. That which doesn't add, detracts. I'd crop away the left and bottom fourths. Alternate 1 The color seems to be too yellow. The stuff in the background to the left of the glasses is distracting. Alternate 2 The horizon isn't level. I like the colors. Maybe more ground, less sky? Putting the horizon near the exact middle doesn't usually lend itself to dramatic images. I'd also re-compose so the trees are more to one side. __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Yahoo! Auctions - Buy the things you want at great prices. http://auctions.yahoo.com/